{"id":25497,"date":"2026-03-22T10:54:02","date_gmt":"2026-03-22T07:54:02","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/?p=25497"},"modified":"2026-03-22T10:54:02","modified_gmt":"2026-03-22T07:54:02","slug":"propozitii-pretentioase-atasasi","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/?p=25497","title":{"rendered":"Propozi\u021bii preten\u021bioase &#8211; Ata\u0219a\u0219i"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>        Rait\u0103. M\u0103car cu privirea. La fa\u021ba locului.<br \/>\n     Una e memoria, alta revederea casei. Dou\u0103 p\u0103r\u021bi din trei ale acoperi\u0219ului apar\u021bineau \u00cempu\u0219catu-lui, nu jum\u0103tate cum opinasem. De-ar fi \u0219i google-ul \u0103la satelitar precis, exact, care s\u0103 vad\u0103 \u0219i musca. \u00cens\u0103 to\u021bi perindacii \u00eenfip\u021bi orbital deasupra planetei sunt la fel de orbi ca \u0219i cei ce tot v\u0103d planete la dracu \u00een praznicul galaxiei. Nou\u0103 ni se furnizeaz\u0103 numai ni\u0219te photoshop-uri bibilite ca s\u0103 mai ob\u021bin\u0103 \u201esavan\u021bii\u201d sume cu nemiluita pentru \u201eveghea\u201d lor permanent\u0103 spre universul extra terestru. Ce trecusem ieri pe drumul m\u00e2\u021belor &#8211; deviat administrativ-edilitar de vinerea mare (de\u0219i mai mic\u0103 ca fus orar) \u0219i s\u00e2mbetele duminici c\u00e2t toat\u0103 ziulica -, lu\u00e2nd Milcovul la pasul anvelopar, smucit, cum numai \u201eNae din carte\u201d \u0219tie a violenta automobilul. \u0218i-n cele trei secunde fugarnice, cu irisul lipit de parbriz, am g\u0103sit propor\u021biile reale. Nu, acoperi\u0219ul nu se vede strop. R\u0103s\u0103rite \u0219i mai noi fa\u021b\u0103 de vecinul de imobil se pot \u00eentrez\u0103ri numai aticurile, late, cum \u00eempresoar\u0103 latent \u021bes\u0103tura \u00een stil popular arhaic a murilor (na!, m-am molipsit de la b\u0103ie\u021ba\u0219ul, cel de la cenaclul sihlean, care, c\u00e2nd vorbe\u0219te, parc\u0103 viseaz\u0103 la pove\u0219ti arabe sheherezadiene; nu zice nimeni c\u0103 un astfel de limbaj deranjeaz\u0103, dar a <strong>asezona<\/strong> numai cu epitete propozi\u021biile, te transport\u0103 mental \u00een spa\u021biul <strong>asiatei<\/strong> pove\u0219ti 1001 de nop\u021bi, \u00een s\u00e2nul \u201e<strong>asirian<\/strong>\u201d al popula\u021biei, pe c\u00e2t de oniric\u0103 \u00een basme, pe at\u00e2t de \u00eencr\u00e2ncenat\u0103 \u0219i uciga\u0219\u0103 cu sine \u0219i oricine nu este ca ea). Deci, ruptura de acoperi\u0219ul mam\u0103 a fost mai lung\u0103 \u0219i mai drastic\u0103. Dup\u0103 ce am dezgolit \u0219i ultima sc\u00e2ndur\u0103 din focarul de putregai, la o treime de poale &#8211; acolo clocise apa -, ne-am dat seama de dramatica opera\u021biune de salvare a asterelii. \u201eTat\u0103, trebuie s\u0103 d\u0103m jos toat\u0103 sc\u00e2ndura, s\u0103 cobor\u00e2m nivelul fa\u021b\u0103 de partea ce o l\u0103s\u0103m aproape intact\u0103 cu vreo 10 centimetri. Sus, la vecin, s\u0103 \u00eenfigem ni\u0219te \u0219or\u021buri, ca urm\u0103torii tinichigii dup\u0103 noi, fie chiar montatori de \u021bigl\u0103 metalic\u0103, s\u0103 poat\u0103 separa cele dou\u0103 propriet\u0103\u021bi corect.\u201d F\u0103r\u0103 c\u00e2\u021biva c\u0103priori, butuc\u0103no\u0219i \u0219i antici, dar \u00eenc\u0103 zdraveni \u00een v\u00e2n\u0103, cei ce flancau marginile spre aticuri, patru sau cinci, schimbasem \u00eentreaga structur\u0103 lemnoas\u0103. Cu sfori \u0219i leviere &#8211; pare ca \u201eDe ce se trag clopotele? De sfoar\u0103!\u201d -, cu adaosuri \u0219i proptele \u00een patru locuri, cam din doi \u00een doi metri, am scos acoperi\u0219ul aproximativ drept. \u201eOala\u201d \u00een care h\u0103l\u0103duise apa la discre\u021bie disp\u0103ruse &#8211; nu u\u0219or, c\u0103ci m-am \u00eentors de zeci de ori s\u0103 tot salt mijlocul; se l\u0103sa probabil deodat\u0103 cu tavanul; fiindc\u0103 sforile erau \u00eentinse doar pe l\u0103\u021bime; pe lungime, c\u0103priorii r\u0103ma\u0219i aveau ei \u00een\u0219i\u0219i o mic\u0103 devia\u021bie concav\u0103 -, reu\u0219isem s\u0103 aducem toate liniile la drept. Ce-am mai suduit deopotriv\u0103 cu transpira\u021bia ba furnizat\u0103 de soarele toropitor, ba de nenum\u0103ratele sfor\u021b\u0103ri de a tot ridica nivelul. Trec\u00e2nd de cadru, sc\u00e2ndura a p\u0103rut o joac\u0103 de copii. Cu c\u00e2te un pumn de cuie fiecare, aloc\u00e2ndu-ne ad-hoc c\u00e2te o linie de sus p\u00e2n\u0103 jos, din trei-patru cioc\u0103niri \u00een cap cuiul intra p\u00e2n\u0103 \u00een pl\u0103selele sc\u00e2ndurii, grinzilor \u0219i c\u0103priorilor. Nici n-ai ce face trei in\u0219i \u00eentr-o or\u0103. Eu, Nae \u0219i Cristi. Tata a servit umbra. O merita. La c\u00e2t\u0103 lumin\u0103 solar\u0103 v\u0103zuser\u0103 pieile lui, n-avea rost s\u0103 mai serveasc\u0103 \u00eenc\u0103 o por\u021bie, s\u0103-l mai <strong>asuprim<\/strong> \u0219i noi cu b\u0103tutul cuielor de \u0219apte. \u00cel <strong>asuprea<\/strong> \u0219i a\u0219a via\u021ba cu trei copchii pe cap. S\u0103 le cau\u021bi de lucru, s\u0103 stea printre <strong>atamani<\/strong> &#8211; cei de asigur\u0103 ora\u0219ului \u0219i satelor \u00eenvecinate un somn f\u0103r\u0103 de ploaie prin tavane &#8211; primul, s\u0103 mai fac\u0103 destule pe la atelier de cu noapte, s\u0103 \u0219ofeze \u0219i multe altele. Deloc facil, deloc u\u0219or. \u0218i obosise. Nu mai avea patruzeci \u0219i, nu mai avea chiar nervul \u0103la de ori ne d\u0103dea jos de pe cas\u0103 printre \u00eenjur\u0103turi, ori pleca el de nu-l mai vedeam c\u00e2teva ore bune, c\u00e2nd <strong>atentam<\/strong> la orgoliul lui, c\u00e2nd propuneam alte metode \u0219i solu\u021bii pentru diverse situa\u021bii de facto dificile. Jos, la umbra&#8230; \u201edudului b\u0103tr\u00e2n\u201d, c\u0103ci un \u201enuc\u201d h\u0103l\u0103duia de ceva vreme cu coroana aproape de strea\u0219in\u0103 \u0219i \u00eenc\u0103 unul cam pe unde f\u0103cusem din foile scoase aripi icariene spre sol, se \u201etocmise\u201d s\u0103 se \u00eentreac\u0103 \u00een politici sociale cu pedantul frate de Dinu.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Rait\u0103. M\u0103car cu privirea. La fa\u021ba locului. Una e memoria, alta revederea casei. Dou\u0103 p\u0103r\u021bi din trei ale acoperi\u0219ului apar\u021bineau<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":7,"featured_media":6924,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"colormag_page_container_layout":"default_layout","colormag_page_sidebar_layout":"default_layout","_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_uf_show_specific_survey":0,"_uf_disable_surveys":false,"ngg_post_thumbnail":0,"video_url":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[7,318],"tags":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/25497"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/7"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=25497"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/25497\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":25498,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/25497\/revisions\/25498"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/6924"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=25497"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=25497"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=25497"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}