{"id":20849,"date":"2023-04-12T20:37:55","date_gmt":"2023-04-12T17:37:55","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/?p=20849"},"modified":"2023-04-12T20:37:55","modified_gmt":"2023-04-12T17:37:55","slug":"caruta-cu-virgule-izgonirea-din-rai","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/?p=20849","title":{"rendered":"C\u0103ru\u021ba cu virgule &#8211; Izgonirea din Rai"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Raiul, \u00eentr-o continu\u0103 zi obi\u0219nuit\u0103. Soare bl\u00e2nd, p\u0103s\u0103rele ciripesc molcom, p\u0103unii se plimb\u0103 lini\u0219ti\u021bi, ciugulind absen\u021bi, mirosuri \u00eemb\u0103t\u0103toare pretutindeni&#8230; La umbra Copacului Vie\u021bii, doi \u00eengera\u0219i afoni \u00ee\u0219i acordeaz\u0103 lirele&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; B\u0103, nu a\u0219a! E sol minor! Vezi cu un semiton mai jos!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Du-te, b\u0103, cu semitonu` t\u0103u! Ce sol minor visezi? E la major toat\u0103 ziua!&#8230; Ia ascult\u0103! Laaa&#8230; laaaa&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; H\u0103, h\u0103, h\u0103! Iote unde era diapazonu`&#8230; sufletului!<br \/>\n&#8211; H\u0103? Ce-i \u0103la diaz&#8230; dipaz&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Las\u0103, nu te mai chinui! Oricum nu \u0219tii! E ceva din viitor!&#8230; Hi! \u0218ase! Ascunde-te! Vine Adam cu Eva!&#8230; \u0218i se ascund repede dup\u0103 copac.<br \/>\nSe apropie Adam cu Eva, merg\u00e2nd m\u00e2n\u0103-n m\u00e2n\u0103, ochi \u00een ochi, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 le cad\u0103 nicio frunz\u0103-n calea lor. Se a\u0219eaz\u0103 la umbra Copacului Vie\u021bii, \u00eembr\u0103\u021bi\u0219a\u021bi&#8230; Adam \u00eei c\u00e2nt\u0103 Evei&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Dincolooo dee nooori, e lumea meaa&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Hai, m\u0103, iubi, da` de ce dincolo de nori? Aicea, ce-are? Ia uite ce frumos eee! Floricele&#8230; p\u0103s\u0103rele&#8230; \u0218i uite, parc\u0103 niciodat\u0103 merele astea n-au fost mai frumoase!&#8230;<br \/>\nAdam e pierdut \u00een desfrunzirea Evei, dar ea nu vede nimic din toate astea.<br \/>\n&#8211; Inima mea nu e-ntreag\u0103&#8230; inima mea, nu e-ntreag\u0103.. dac\u0103 nu e\u0219ti tu&#8230; Hm? Ce zici, iubi? C\u0103 eram pierdut \u00een tine&#8230; \u0103\u0103\u0103, \u00een frumuse\u021bea ta!<br \/>\n&#8211; M\u0103, iubi, fii \u0219i tu mai&#8230; nu \u0219tiu!&#8230; mai p\u0103m\u00e2ntean! Cu picioarele pe p\u0103m\u00e2nt, nu cu capu-n nori mereu! Tu nu te-ai plictisit de via\u021ba asta? S\u0103 nu faci nimic toat\u0103 ziua, s\u0103 vezi mereu acelea\u0219i lucruri, s\u0103&#8230; Nu sim\u021bi nevoia de o schimbare-n via\u021ba ta? Altfel de emo\u021bie&#8230; senza\u021bii tari!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Mvaai, iubi, da` io mereu am parte de o senza\u021bie tare l\u00e2ng\u0103 tine! Numa` c\u0103 tu nu vezi \u0219i nu \u0219tii ce \u00eenseamn\u0103 asta!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Iubi, te rog, nu fi prozaic! De ce crezi c\u0103 eu n-am ochi pentru tine? Dar nu putem tr\u0103i mereu a\u0219a, doar zbenguindu-ne \u00een pielea goal\u0103&#8230; \u0218i \u0219tii doar, c\u0103 Creatorul ne-a interzis p\u0103catul trupesc!&#8230;<br \/>\nDup\u0103 copac, cei doi \u00eengera\u0219i \u00ee\u0219i dau coate \u0219i abia se ab\u021bin s\u0103 nu r\u00e2d\u0103&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Mare c\u00e2t inima mea&#8230; mare c\u00e2t inima mea&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Iar \u00eencepi?! Dac\u0103 a\u0219 avea cu ce s-o compar&#8230; \u021ai-a\u0219 spune dac\u0103 e a\u0219a de mare cum o tot c\u00e2n\u021bi!&#8230;<br \/>\nCei doi \u00eengera\u0219i, ies repede de dup\u0103 copac.<br \/>\n&#8211; A zis cineva ceva de c\u00e2ntat? Maestre, un sol major!&#8230; A\u0219a! Mai mi\u0219c-o un pic!&#8230; Este!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; M\u0103, voi de unde a\u021bi mai ap\u0103rut? Iote la ei! Pleca\u021bi, c\u0103 n-am cu ce s\u0103 v\u0103 pl\u0103tesc!<br \/>\n&#8211; \u0218iii&#8230; se face pentru domnu`&#8230; mnu`&#8230; mnu` Adam&#8230; dam&#8230; dam \u0219i pentru unica&#8230; ca&#8230; ca&#8230; ca iubire a ve\u021bii lui, domni\u0219oara Eva&#8230; va&#8230; vaa! De \u0219tiai c\u0103 nu putem tr\u0103iii&#8230; ra&#8230; ta&#8230; ta&#8230; n-ar fi trebuit s-avem copii!&#8230; Se \u0219tieee!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Copii?! Ce-s \u0103ia, m\u0103, iubi?! \u0218tii de a\u0219a ceva?<br \/>\n&#8211; Nu \u0219tiu, drag\u0103! A\u0219a e c\u00e2ntecu`! Nu-i lua \u00een seam\u0103 pe l\u0103utarii \u0103\u0219tia! E doar folclor rupt din alt Rai!&#8230; B\u0103, gata! Hai, c\u00e2nta\u021bi la alt\u0103 mas\u0103, c\u0103 n-am verzi\u0219ori! H\u0103, h\u0103! Bun\u0103 asta, nu? Taman \u00een locul \u0103sta luminat, loc cu verdea\u021b\u0103, s\u0103 n-ai verzi\u0219ori&#8230; Mdea! Nu v-a\u021bi prins! Nu \u0219tiu de ce am crezut&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Hai, boss, c\u0103 c\u00e2nt\u0103m degeaba! La ce mas\u0103 ne trimi\u021bi? Mai \u0219tii pe cineva \u00een toat\u0103 gr\u0103dina asta de var\u0103? Sunte\u021bi numa` voi! I-auzi, ce zice! ,,Cine m-a f\u0103cut OM mare\u201d&#8230; I-auzi, domni\u0219oara Eva! ,, Nu \u0219tii tu s\u0103 fii b\u0103rbat&#8230; pentru o fat\u0103&#8230; nici m\u0103car n-ai \u00eencercat&#8230; m\u0103car odat\u0103&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; B\u0103, voi n-auzi\u021bi? Hai, valea, `v\u0103 Raiu` mamilor voastre de afoni!<br \/>\n&#8211; Da` las\u0103-i m\u0103, iubi, c\u0103-mi pl\u0103cea melodia! \u0218i versurile&#8230; m-au uns la inim\u0103&#8230; c\u00e2t realism&#8230; sim\u021bire&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Bine, boss! Am plecat! Da` s\u0103 nu ne mai cau\u021bi, c\u0103 nu mai venim!<br \/>\n&#8211; Iubi, tu meri\u021bi mai mult! Tu meri\u021bi iubire real\u0103, sentimente, m\u00e2ng\u00e2ieri&#8230; toate numai pentru tine! Doar o via\u021b\u0103 nu mi-ar ajunge s\u0103 te iubesc!&#8230; S\u0103 te&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Auzi, iubi? Mie mi-e cam foame! Dac\u0103 zici c\u0103 m\u0103 iube\u0219ti, \u00eentinde-te \u0219i tu dup\u0103 un m\u0103r de-\u0103la!<br \/>\n&#8211; Tu auzi ce zic, m\u0103car?! Nu sim\u021bi nimic din zbaterile mele? Din tr\u0103irile mele care m\u0103 ard pe din\u0103untru ca focul Gheenei&#8230; ce-o mai fi \u0219i \u0103la?<br \/>\n&#8211; Iubi, nu te mai perpeli at\u00e2ta! Vreau doar un m\u0103r! Ce mare lucru?!<br \/>\n&#8211; Dar \u0219tii doar c\u0103 ne-a fost interzis de Creator! Nu putem s\u0103 facem asta!<br \/>\n&#8211; Mda! V\u0103d ce \u00eenseamn\u0103 zbaterile alea ale tale, dac\u0103 nu te zba\u021bi nici m\u0103car pentru un m\u0103r!&#8230; \u0218tiam eu! Pleac\u0103, s\u0103 nu te mai v\u0103d! Mincinosule! Ipocritule!&#8230;<br \/>\nAdam se ridic\u0103 \u0219i se \u00eendep\u0103rteaz\u0103 de Eva, a\u0219tept\u00e2nd s\u0103-i treac\u0103 crizele.<br \/>\nDintre crengile Copacului se aude un f\u00e2\u0219\u00e2it slab \u0219i un \u0219arpe albastru coboar\u0103 \u00eencet spre capul Evei.<br \/>\n&#8211; Pssst! Pssst! Ssssalut!<br \/>\n&#8211; A! Ce m-am speriat! Un \u0219arpe! Adame, un \u0219arpe!<br \/>\nDar Adam e prea departe s-o aud\u0103.<br \/>\n&#8211; Sssst! Nu \u021bipa! Am ss\u0103-\u021bi ssspun ceva care-\u021bi va ssschimba via\u021ba, a\u0219a cum am auzit c\u0103-\u021bi dore\u0219ti!<br \/>\n&#8211; A&#8230; a.. adic\u0103 ai auzit tot ce-am vorbit noi?<br \/>\n&#8211; Ssssigur c\u0103 da! Sssunt \u00een acessst copac de c\u00e2nd m\u0103 \u0219tiu!&#8230; Dar nu vrei sss\u0103-\u021bi ssspun cum ss\u0103-\u021bi ssschimbi via\u021ba?<br \/>\n&#8211; Mmmm&#8230; ba da!<br \/>\n&#8211; Assscult\u0103-m\u0103 bine, atunci! Ssspune-i lui Adam sss\u0103-\u021bi dea un m\u0103r din pomul \u0103sta, \u0219i c\u00e2nd vei mu\u0219ca din el via\u021ba ta o sss\u0103 \u021bi sse sschimbe pentru totdeauna! O sss\u0103 cuno\u0219ti sssenza\u021biile tari, ssenssul vie\u021bii \u0219i sssuprema fericire, dincolo de orice imagina\u021bie!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Vaaai! Ce tare! Sigur c\u0103 vreau!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; A\u0219a sss\u0103 faci! Sss\u0103 nu ui\u021bi! Ssssalut!<br \/>\n\u00centre timp, Adam se apropie sp\u0103\u0219it, cu un buchet de imortele \u00een m\u00e2n\u0103.<br \/>\n&#8211; Iubi, te rog, iart\u0103-m\u0103! Sunt un mare dobitoc, c\u0103 nu sunt atent la dorin\u021bele tale&#8230; la sentimentele tale! Uite, \u021bi-am adus buche\u021belul \u0103sta de imortele! Nu sunt frumoase? Sunt numai pentru tine!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Da, sunt frumoase! \u0218i da, m\u0103 superi c\u0103 nu e\u0219ti atent la dorin\u021bele mele! Uite, de exemplu, dorin\u021ba mea cea mai mare acuma, e s\u0103 m\u0103n\u00e2nc un m\u0103r! Un singur m\u0103r! Cer prea mult, Adame?!&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Eva, singura iubire a vie\u021bii mele! \u0218tii doar c\u0103 Creatorul ne-a interzis&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Nu vreau s\u0103 \u0219tiu nimic! Dac\u0103 m\u0103 iube\u0219ti a\u0219a cum \u00eemi tot spui, atunci vreau \u0219i o dovad\u0103! Vreau un m\u0103r! Po\u021bi asta?&#8230; Po\u021bi s\u0103 faci \u0219i tu ceva concret m\u0103car o dat\u0103-n via\u021ba ta, Adame?&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Ho, nebuno! Gata! Ajunge, c\u0103 m-ai b\u0103gat \u00een toate focurile Iadului! Ho, c\u0103-\u021bi dau un m\u0103r!&#8230;<br \/>\nAdam se ca\u021b\u0103r\u0103 pe trunchiul gros al Copacului, se \u00eentinde spre primul m\u0103r care-i iese \u00een cale \u0219i-l rupe. N-apuc\u0103 s\u0103 coboare, c\u0103, dintr-o dat\u0103, cerul Raiului se acoper\u0103 cu nori negri, se porne\u0219te un v\u00e2nt puternic cu ploaie, ninsoare, tunete \u0219i fulgere \u00een acela\u0219i timp&#8230; O voce puternic\u0103 se auzi dintr-o sp\u0103rtur\u0103 \u00een nori, din care un m\u0103nunchi de raze cobora, lumin\u00e2ndu-i chiar pe cei doi, care, speria\u021bi, se str\u00e2ng unul \u00een altul&#8230;<br \/>\n&#8211; Nenoroci\u021bilor! M\u0103, Adame, m\u0103! \u0218i tu, Evo! Bolnavilor de avere ce sunte\u021bi! N-a\u021bi muncit \u0219i n-a\u021bi \u00eemp\u0103r\u021bit cu nimeni tot ce-a\u021bi avut! A\u021bi umblat am\u00e2ndoi descul\u021bi \u0219i niciunul n-a avut mai mult! Ce mai vre\u021bi voi de la mine, nenoroci\u021bilor? S\u0103 ie\u0219i\u021bi la drumul mare \u0219i s\u0103 m\u0103 jefui\u021bi?&#8230; De milioane de ani m\u0103 zbat s\u0103 nu dispar\u0103 P\u0103m\u00e2ntul, s\u0103 vi-l las vou\u0103 \u00eentreg, orbilor \u0219i s\u0103lbaticilor la minte!&#8230; \u0218i voi?! At\u00e2ta vreme c\u00e2t tr\u0103iesc Eu, ori face\u021bi ce zic Eu, ori, dac\u0103 nu, s\u0103 pleca\u021bi!..<br \/>\n&#8211; Iertare, Doamne! \u00eeng\u0103im\u0103 Adam.<br \/>\n&#8211; Nu sunt eu de vin\u0103! Eu n-am vrut, dar el s-a urcat s\u0103-mi dea un m\u0103r, s\u0103-mi arate c\u0103 m\u0103 iube\u0219te! zise \u0219i Eva.<br \/>\n&#8211; T\u0103ce\u021bi am\u00e2ndoi! tun\u0103 vocea. De azi \u00eenainte nu mai sta\u021bi aici! Nu v-a pl\u0103cut huzurul \u0219i \u00eendestularea? Atunci pleca\u021bi chinui\u021bi-v\u0103 s\u0103 v\u0103 c\u00e2\u0219tiga\u021bi singuri m\u00e2ncarea, cu sudoarea trupurilor voastre nevrednice de un loc \u00een Rai! Cre\u0219te\u021bi \u0219i v\u0103 \u00eenmul\u021bi\u021bi, s\u0103 vede\u021bi cum e s\u0103 nu mai fi\u021bi doar voi singuri pe P\u0103m\u00e2nt! A\u021bi vrut s\u0103 \u0219ti\u021bi cum e p\u0103catul? Atunci o s\u0103 le face\u021bi pe toate!&#8230; Hai, valea!<br \/>\n&#8211; Iertare, din nou, Doamne! Am gre\u0219it! Nu se mai \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103! \u00ceng\u0103duie-mi m\u0103car mie s\u0103 r\u0103m\u00e2n aici!&#8230;<br \/>\nNici azi nu se \u0219tie cine a fost cel care i-a adresat aceast\u0103 ultim\u0103 rug\u0103minte Creatorului. Dar e sigur c\u0103 n-a reu\u0219it s\u0103-l \u00eenduplece!<br \/>\nUrmeaz\u0103 un travelling circular cu Adam \u0219i Eva \u021bin\u00e2ndu-se de m\u00e2n\u0103 \u0219i uit\u00e2ndu-se \u00een dep\u0103rtare unde, un soare ro\u0219u apunea de dup\u0103 hotarele Raiului. \u00cen fundal se aud vocile celor doi \u00eengera\u0219i:<br \/>\n&#8211; \u0218iii se face pentru&#8230;ntru&#8230; ntru Adam&#8230; dam \u0219i Eva&#8230; va&#8230; va care e alunga\u021bi din Rai, se \u0219tieee! I-auzi ce spuneee, de la maestru` Gu\u021b\u0103&#8230;\u021b\u0103&#8230;\u021b\u0103:<br \/>\n,,Am crezut \u00een tineee, dar \u021bi-ai b\u0103tut joc de mineee, \u021bi-am dat via\u021ba meaaa, dar \u021bi-ai b\u0103tut joc de eaaaa&#8230;\u201d <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Raiul, \u00eentr-o continu\u0103 zi obi\u0219nuit\u0103. 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