{"id":19273,"date":"2022-09-27T02:21:01","date_gmt":"2022-09-26T23:21:01","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/?p=19273"},"modified":"2022-09-27T02:21:01","modified_gmt":"2022-09-26T23:21:01","slug":"spatii-culturale-nr-30-8","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/?p=19273","title":{"rendered":"Spa\u021bii culturale nr. 30 (8)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>    <strong>  Vasilica ILIE   <\/strong><br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/ilie-vasilica-e1647622397136.jpg\" data-rel=\"lightbox-image-0\" data-rl_title=\"\" data-rl_caption=\"\" title=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/ilie-vasilica-266x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"266\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-17572 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 266px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 266\/300;\" \/><noscript><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/ilie-vasilica-266x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"266\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-17572\" \/><\/noscript><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>Elegie optimist\u0103<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>a\u015f putea \u00eencepe toate zilele<br \/>\ncu un optimism debordant<br \/>\ndar m\u0103 opre\u015fte<br \/>\ncon\u015ftiin\u0163a care strig\u0103<br \/>\ndisperat\u0103 la mine<br \/>\nc\u0103 \u201edomnul\u201d<br \/>\nnu mai este \u00een trend:<\/p>\n<p>(nu \u015ftiu de ce<br \/>\n\u00eel simt ca o r\u0103d\u0103cin\u0103<br \/>\ncare mi-a cuprins<br \/>\nt\u0103lpile<br \/>\n\u015fi ca o lipitoare<br \/>\n\u00eemi suge s\u00e2ngele<br \/>\ndin vene)<\/p>\n<p>\u201east\u0103zi trebuie<br \/>\ns\u0103 ai o mutr\u0103 acr\u0103<br \/>\ns\u0103 fii frustrat<br \/>\ns\u0103rac lipit<br \/>\ns\u0103 fii suferind<br \/>\ns\u0103 fii b\u0103tut<br \/>\ns\u0103-\u0163i pl\u00e2ngi de mil\u0103<br \/>\nve\u015fnic nemul\u0163umit<br \/>\ns\u0103-\u0163i blestemi mama<br \/>\ncare te-a f\u0103cut\u201d<br \/>\nspuse ea.<\/p>\n<p>\u201edomnul\u201d optimism<br \/>\nm\u0103 b\u0103tu pe um\u0103rul st\u00e2ng<br \/>\napoi cioc\u0103ni<br \/>\nla u\u015fa inimii<br \/>\n\u015fi-mi spuse<br \/>\ncu glasul unui vr\u0103jitor:<br \/>\n\u201etu nu vezi c\u0103 ai<br \/>\ntrecut\u0103 prin apa<br \/>\nbotezului litera &#8222;V&#8221;<br \/>\nsemnul victoriei?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201eam luptat \u00een via\u0163\u0103<br \/>\ndar cred c\u0103<br \/>\nnumai voin\u0163a a \u00eenvins\u201d<br \/>\n\u00eei r\u0103spund.<\/p>\n<p>dac\u0103 stau \u015fi m\u0103 g\u00e2ndesc bine<br \/>\nnu sunt singura<br \/>\noptimist\u0103 al c\u0103rei nume<br \/>\n\u00eencepe cu litera &#8222;V&#8221;<br \/>\nc\u0103 nu sunt singura care<br \/>\nscrie despre optimism<br \/>\nla modul ironic&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>a mai fost cineva<br \/>\nc\u00e2ndva<br \/>\ncare se numea<br \/>\nVoltaire&#8230; <\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nElegie pentru un m\u0103nunchi de g\u00e2nduri<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>un m\u0103nunchi de g\u00e2nduri<br \/>\ncad \u00een m\u00e2inile mele<br \/>\nca ni\u015fte rug\u0103ciuni<br \/>\ntransform\u00e2ndu-se \u00een cuvinte\u2026<\/p>\n<p>ce dor \u00eemi este<br \/>\nde cuv\u00e2ntul \u015foptit<br \/>\n\u00een noapte izvor\u00e2t<br \/>\na\u015fternut pe foaie velin\u0103!<\/p>\n<p>\u00ee\u0163i scriu o scrisoare<br \/>\nt\u00e2rziu<br \/>\n\u00een noapte<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd ielele danseaz\u0103<br \/>\no hor\u0103 a nelini\u015ftii<br \/>\n\u015fi a nesomnului meu\u2026<\/p>\n<p>\u00eemi adun toate puterile<br \/>\n\u015fi cu ochii \u00eentredeschi\u015fi<br \/>\ncreionez o frunz\u0103 de toamn\u0103<br \/>\nruginie<br \/>\n\u00een form\u0103 de inim\u0103<br \/>\n\u00eemi \u00eenf\u0103\u015for g\u00e2ndurile \u00een ea<br \/>\no stropesc cu mult noroc<br \/>\n\u015fi \u00eei dau drumul pe apa visului<br \/>\ncare vine odat\u0103 cu somnul\u2026<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nElegie pentru moarte<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>moartea se \u00eemprietene\u015fte<br \/>\nat\u00e2t de repede cu omul<br \/>\nca atunci c\u00e2nd<br \/>\nse stinge o lum\u00e2nare<br \/>\npe tortul de aniversare<br \/>\nsau c\u00e2t ai clipi<br \/>\no singur\u0103 dat\u0103 din pleoape.<\/p>\n<p>\u00ee\u0163i d\u0103 t\u00e2rcoale<br \/>\ntoat\u0103 via\u0163a<br \/>\no surprinzi<br \/>\n\u00een toate momentele tale de panic\u0103<br \/>\natunci c\u00e2nd te doare ceva<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd e\u015fti dezam\u0103git<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd pierzi o iubire<br \/>\nun prieten<br \/>\npe cineva din familie\u2026.<\/p>\n<p>ea nu te \u00eentreab\u0103<br \/>\ndac\u0103 o iube\u015fti necondi\u0163ionat<br \/>\nuneori te chinuie<br \/>\nparc\u0103 s-ar juca<br \/>\nde-a c\u0103l\u0103ul<br \/>\nalteori te las\u0103<br \/>\naninat de un vis de noapte<br \/>\n(atunci simte c\u0103 e\u015fti cel mai fericit om)<br \/>\n\u015fi nu te mai las\u0103<br \/>\ns\u0103 te treze\u015fti niciodat\u0103.<\/p>\n<p>\u00ee\u0163i stoarce toate puterile<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd are poft\u0103<br \/>\nse mai \u00eenfrupt\u0103<br \/>\ndintr-un organ al t\u0103u<br \/>\nca un preludiu.<\/p>\n<p>ah niciodat\u0103<br \/>\nmoartea nu se satur\u0103 de via\u0163\u0103<br \/>\n(este ca o lipitoare)<br \/>\nomul se satur\u0103<br \/>\nde cele mai multe ori.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nElegie pentru un \u00eendemn<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>stai l\u00e2ng\u0103 mine iubitule<br \/>\npe prispa dintre grani\u0163e<br \/>\ndeschide cartea g\u00e2ndurilor mele<br \/>\n\u015fi descoper\u0103-l pe cel<br \/>\ncare te reprezint\u0103.<\/p>\n<p>crezi c\u0103 te pun la grea \u00eencercare?<br \/>\nvreau s\u0103-\u0163i v\u0103d intui\u0163ia<br \/>\n\u015fi adev\u0103rata inten\u0163ie<\/p>\n<p>uite<br \/>\n\u00ee\u0163i dau un indiciu:<br \/>\n\u015ftii c\u0103 \u00eemi place simplitatea<br \/>\na\u015f dori s\u0103-i g\u0103se\u015fti profunzimea<br \/>\nla mine nu exist\u0103<br \/>\nlupt\u0103 \u00eentre g\u00e2nduri.<\/p>\n<p>haide<br \/>\nlas\u0103-\u0163i orgoliul balt\u0103<br \/>\npotole\u015fte-\u0163i setea de r\u0103zbunare<br \/>\nironia p\u0103strez-o pentru mai t\u00e2rziu<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd vom dansa<br \/>\n\u015fi m\u0103 vei c\u0103lca pe picioare\u2026<\/p>\n<p>dar \u015ftii ce? n-ar fi mai bine<br \/>\ns\u0103 \u00eenve\u0163i alfabetul iubirii<br \/>\n\u015fi apoi s\u0103 trecem la fapte?<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nElegie pentru o t\u0103cere<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>tac<br \/>\no t\u0103cere \u00een plus sau \u00een minus<br \/>\ne totuna<br \/>\npentru c\u0103 nu \u015ftiu<br \/>\ndac\u0103 tot ce spui<br \/>\n(\u00een cuvinte \u00eemprumutate)<br \/>\neste adev\u0103rat<br \/>\n\u015fi apoi<br \/>\n\u201everba volant\u201d\u2026<\/p>\n<p>reiterez<br \/>\nla mine<br \/>\nfaptele<br \/>\nsunt liter\u0103 de lege.<\/p>\n<p>din t\u0103cere<br \/>\nse  na\u015fte dep\u0103rtarea<br \/>\n\u00eentre noi<br \/>\nva cre\u015fte copacul<br \/>\ncare \u00eenflore\u015fte doruri<br \/>\n\u015fi se va usca de durere.<\/p>\n<p>\u00eemi doresc um\u0103rul t\u0103u st\u00e2ng<br \/>\npe care s\u0103-mi a\u015fez capul<br \/>\ns\u0103 simt acea f\u00e2lf\u00e2ire<br \/>\nde arip\u0103 sub bra\u0163<br \/>\nca \u015fi cum<br \/>\nun roi de fluturi<br \/>\nvin din inima ta<br \/>\nintr\u0103 \u00een inima mea<br \/>\nun fel<br \/>\nde  lege a vaselor comunicante.<\/p>\n<p>\u00eemi doresc<br \/>\n\u00eembr\u0103\u0163i\u015f\u0103ri palpabile<br \/>\ns\u0103ruturi pasionale<br \/>\ng\u00e2nduri spuse cu voce tare\u2026<\/p>\n<p>de ce at\u00e2tea subtilit\u0103\u0163i<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd omul este f\u0103cut s\u0103 comunice?<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nViorica PETROVICI<\/strong><br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/petrovici-scaled-e1664234342853.jpg\" data-rel=\"lightbox-image-1\" data-rl_title=\"\" data-rl_caption=\"\" title=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/petrovici-232x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"232\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-19274 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 232px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 232\/300;\" \/><noscript><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/petrovici-232x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"232\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-19274\" \/><\/noscript><\/a><\/p>\n<p>             <strong>O RAZ\u0102 \u0218I C\u00c2NTECUL EI<\/strong><br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/13-2-e1664234387740.jpg\" data-rel=\"lightbox-image-2\" data-rl_title=\"\" data-rl_caption=\"\" title=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/13-2-300x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-19275 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 300px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 300\/300;\" \/><noscript><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/13-2-300x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-19275\" \/><\/noscript><\/a><\/p>\n<p>\u00centr-un Univers dual, Carmen Agoutin r\u0103m\u00e2ne s\u0103m\u00e2n\u021b\u0103 de lumin\u0103, o inim\u0103 \u00een care se adun\u0103 c\u00e2ntecul \u0219i din care izvor\u0103sc mistere ,,\u00een\u021beleg\/ de ce\/ nu pot fi\/ \u00een\u021beles\/ din inima mea\/ se aud\/ mistere\u201d (L\u00e2ng\u0103 um\u0103rul t\u0103u). Rareori omul se confund\u0103 cu opera lui \u00een acest urcu\u0219 pe o sabie cu numele Adev\u0103r \u0219i glisarea pe orizontala cotidian\u0103 ce poart\u0103 urmele pa\u0219ilor mereu \u00eens\u00e2ngera\u021bi de s\u00e2rma sub\u021bire pe care \u00eenainteaz\u0103 poetul, dar Carmen Agoutin, prin cartea publicat\u0103 la Editura Alexandria Publishing Hause, 2013, ilustrat\u0103 de autoare, reflect\u0103 un artist ce se crucific\u0103 asemenea lui Prometeu ,,s\u0103 m\u0103 doboare doar trecerea\/ \u00eentre cer \u0219i p\u0103m\u00e2nt\/ c-un sur\u00e2s pentru fuga nebun\u0103 a cailor liberi\/ cu o lacrim\u0103 pentru firul ierbii\/ strivit de copitele lor\/ eu, crucificat\u0103-n zbor\u201d (Crez).<br \/>\nPoet\u0103 solar\u0103, Carmen Agoutin ridic\u0103 aceast\u0103 \u0219tachet\u0103 a sincerit\u0103\u021bii \u0219i abandonului de sine la cele mai \u00eenalte culmi, l\u0103s\u00e2ndu-se judecat\u0103 doar de aer, de cel care propag\u0103 sunetul cuv\u00e2ntului rostit \u0219i-l transform\u0103 \u00een via\u021b\u0103 prin vibra\u021bia sa divin\u0103: \u201es\u0103 plutesc pe s\u00e2rma mea la mare \u00een\u0103l\u021bime\/ sfid\u00e2nd golul din dreapta\/ c\u00e2nt\u0103rind provocarea golului din st\u00e2nga\/ eu la mijloc\/ s\u0103 m\u0103 lep\u0103d de spaime\/ s\u0103 m\u0103 judece doar aerul\u201d (Crez).<br \/>\nIubirea este firul ro\u0219u care str\u0103luce\u0219te \u00een integritatea volumului, o ajut\u0103 s\u0103 traverseze de\u0219ertul unei singur\u0103t\u0103\u021bi asumate \u0219i devine con\u0219tiin\u021b\u0103 plin\u0103 de altruism: ,,moartea vine\/ m\u0103 adulmec\u0103\/ \u0219i te adulmec\u0103\/ \u00een mine\/ \u0219i-\u0219i pierde speran\u021ba\/ s\u0103 m\u0103 mai aib\u0103\u201d. Aceast\u0103 form\u0103 eteric\u0103 \u00een care vibreaz\u0103 ecoul unei privighetori poart\u0103 povara unei maturit\u0103\u021bi civice dureros de ap\u0103s\u0103toare: ,,pleoapa mi-e grea de c\u0103l\u0103torie\/ p\u00e2n\u0103 acum am tr\u0103it o poveste\/ o clip\u0103 suspendat\u0103 sfid\u00e2nd legile firii\/ dar m-am n\u0103scut prea devreme\/ \u0219i nu mai pot \u00eenfrunta\/ acest de\u0219ert sonor\/ ce-mi face s\u0103 s\u00e2ngereze timpanul\/ opri\u021bi-v\u0103 strig\/ \u0219i m\u0103 strecor u\u0219or \u00een r\u0103d\u0103cina unui copac\/ ce cu tandre\u021be m\u0103 \u00eembr\u0103\u021bi\u0219eaz\u0103\u201d (Manifest antimisoginism).<br \/>\nComuniunea complex\u0103 cu vegetalul o transform\u0103 pe poet\u0103 \u00eentr-un copac ce are \u00een arhitectura frem\u0103t\u0103toare de frunze energia pur\u0103 a cuv\u00e2ntului-miracol \u0219i \u00een loc de flori sunetul vindec\u0103tor al muzicii: \u201es\u0103 nu-mi spui\/ c\u0103 pleci\/ ploaia va biciui\/ trupurile goale ale copacilor\/ (\u2026) ca ni\u0219te semne multe\/ s\u0103 c\u0103dem\/ la picioarele z\u0103rii\/ peste noi\/ a\u0219tearn\u0103-se timpul\/ \u00eencet\u201d (Ritual). Ploaia ca un laitmotiv \u00eembrac\u0103 cititorul \u00een aura unui timp dinafara celui palpabil, un timp al zborului \u00een care leb\u0103da poate fi \u0219i alb\u0103 \u0219i neagr\u0103: ,,n-a\u0219 \u0219ti s\u0103 m\u0103-ntorc\/ din valea f\u0103r\u0103 sf\u00e2r\u0219it a ploilor\/ ca o vocal\u0103 de metal\/ \u00een c\u0103dere\/ sau ca umbra v\u0103duvit\u0103\/ de \u00een\u021beles\/ ca un zbor t\u00e2rziu\/ de lebede negre\/ f\u0103r\u0103 ecou\u201d (Sunt eu).<br \/>\nCarmen Agoutin este posesoarea unui registru lingvistic stenic, substantivul ei devine verb prin \u00eenc\u0103rc\u0103tura semantic\u0103: aerul, fuga, corzi, copac, \u00eengeri, toate aduc mi\u0219care, izvor\u0103sc \u00eenspre cititor din risipirea poetei ce poart\u0103 \u201edrept scut doar dimine\u021bile\u201d (Sunt eu). Metafora e generoas\u0103, feminin\u0103 a\u0219 spune, cromatica \u00eens\u0103 r\u0103m\u00e2ne sobr\u0103, masculin\u0103, alb-negru inflexibil\u0103 \u00een oglindirea lumii de sus \u0219i a celei de jos \u201eplopii se bat cu re\u00eenflorite palme de t\u0103cere\/ lacrima neagr\u0103 de foc se-nchide-n copaci\u201d (Diminea\u021b\u0103). Bucuria de via\u021b\u0103 trece zidul opac \u0219i \u00eenvinge: \u201edeodat\u0103 lumina \u0219i-a l\u0103sat capul\/ de cealalt\u0103 parte a securii\u201d (Prejudecat\u0103 sau demitizarea \u0219arpelui).<br \/>\nCaii liberi poart\u0103 pe coamele fugii spiritul ne\u00eengenunchiat al poetei, copitele lor de argint fulger\u0103 \u0219i raze trezesc vederea din orbul cosmic \u201eeste o raz\u0103\/ ce trece de pe o frunte pe alta\/ cine o vede r\u0103m\u00e2ne orb\/ vede pe din\u0103untru\/ nesomnul urc\u00e2nd trepte\/ pe fiecare c\u00e2te un cerc de foc\u201d (P\u00e2n\u0103 la ochi). Ea cade ,,\u00een puterea cuv\u00e2ntului\u201d de unde \u00eenlumineaz\u0103, din\u0103untrul cercului \u0219i dinafar\u0103 \u0219i am certitudinea c\u0103 va constitui un reper nu doar ca om ci \u0219i \u00een domeniul f\u0103c\u0103torilor de cuv\u00e2nt.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nIonel POPA<\/strong><br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS.jpg\" data-rel=\"lightbox-image-3\" data-rl_title=\"\" data-rl_caption=\"\" title=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"200\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-14799 lazyload\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS.jpg 400w\" data-sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" src=\"data:image\/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 300px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 300\/200;\" \/><noscript><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"200\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-14799\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/06\/IONEL-POPA-MEDIAS.jpg 400w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/noscript><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>UN POEM ONTOLOGIC<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Intertextualitatea este de dou\u0103 feluri corespunz\u0103toare la dou\u0103 modalit\u0103\u0163i de practicare: ca joc, simpl\u0103 demonstra\u0163ie de dexteritate, \u015fi rescriere \u00een ideea unor scopuri \u00eenalte \u015fi nobile. \u00cen al doilea caz, procedeul literar al rescrierii presupune munc\u0103 mig\u0103loas\u0103 \u015fi efort creativ.<br \/>\nC\u00e2nd Adrian Erbiceanu repoveste\u015fte \u00een versuri basmul rom\u00e2nesc Tinere\u0163e f\u0103r\u0103 b\u0103tr\u00e2ne\u0163e \u015fi via\u0163\u0103 f\u0103r\u0103 de moarte, nu face numai rescriere, ci s\u0103v\u00e2r\u015fe\u015fte \u015fi un act de crea\u0163ie: Adrian Erbiceanu, Tinere\u0163e f\u0103r\u0103 b\u0103tr\u00e2ne\u0163e, Ed. Anamarol, Bucure\u015fti, 2013. \u00cen ce const\u0103 partea creativ\u0103 a poetului Adrian Erbiceanu?<br \/>\n\u00cen rescrierea basmului firul narativ este esen\u0163ializat, nu redus cum se mai \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103 la al\u0163ii. Axul narativ r\u0103m\u00e2ne drumul ini\u0163iatic. \u00cen acest basm rom\u00e2nesc, mai mult ca \u00een oricare altul, drumul nu este at\u00e2t \u00een spa\u0163iu, c\u00e2t \u00een timp. Noul coautor al basmului va pune accent tocmai pe acest aspect, reu\u015find astfel s\u0103 aduc\u0103 \u00een prim-plan poten\u0163ialul filosofic al basmului. Autorul rescrierii nu se las\u0103 prins \u00een pl\u0103cerea descrierilor, el desf\u0103\u015foar\u0103 o medita\u0163ie asupra timpului. Scenariul epic are \u00een filigranul s\u0103u sigla timpului: \u00cemp\u0103ratul \u015fi \u00cemp\u0103r\u0103teasa au ajuns la b\u0103tr\u00e2ne\u0163e \u015fi nu au urma\u015f; mo\u015ftenitorul va veni pe cale magic\u0103 datorit\u0103 unche\u015fului dibaci \u00een toate; prin\u0163ul refuz\u0103 s\u0103 se nasc\u0103 la soroc; pentru a se na\u015fte p\u0103rintele \u00eei f\u0103g\u0103duie\u015fte ,,tinere\u0163e f\u0103r\u0103 b\u0103tr\u00e2ne\u0163e \u015fi via\u0163\u0103 f\u0103r\u0103 de moarte\u201d; feciorul cre\u015fte \u00eentr-un an c\u00e2t al\u0163ii \u00een \u015fapte; t\u00e2n\u0103rul crai \u00ee\u015fi p\u0103r\u0103se\u015fte p\u0103rin\u0163ii care nu-i pot da ceea ce i-au promis \u015fi pleac\u0103 \u00een lume, \u00een c\u0103utarea nemuririi.<br \/>\n\u00cen noul text basmic anumite lexeme \u015fi sintagme care desemneaz\u0103 ideea de timp au o anumit\u0103 frecven\u0163\u0103. Lor li se adaug\u0103 formula median\u0103 specific\u0103 basmului care \u00eempinge, duce \u00eenainte povestea: ,,S\u0103 ne fie cu iertare!\u2026 \/ Basmul altcum st\u0103 s-ateste! \/ Rogu-v\u0103 ave\u0163i r\u0103bdare, \/ C\u0103-nainte mult mai este.\u201d<br \/>\nSunt respectate cele trei etape ale ini\u0163ierii: 1. Trec\u00e2nd prin p\u0103durea de sibile, prin\u0163ul \u015fi calul s\u0103u \u00eenaripat ajung pe t\u0103r\u00e2mul Gheonoaiei vegheat din cer de ,,dou\u0103 luni \u00een loc de una\u201d. \u00cenfr\u00e2nt\u0103 \u00een lupt\u0103, Gheonoaia se pred\u0103 \u015fi-i ofer\u0103 viteazului ca so\u0163ie pe una din fiice \u015fi o parte din \u00eemp\u0103r\u0103\u0163ie. Prin\u0163ul nu se las\u0103 captiv \u00een acest spa\u0163iu apocaliptic, pleac\u0103 mai departe; 2. Fiul de \u00eemp\u0103rat ajunge pe t\u0103r\u00e2mul Scorpiei, sora Gheonoaiei, mai malefic\u0103 dec\u00e2t aceasta. Descrierea noului t\u0103r\u00e2m, este sumar\u0103, dar capabil\u0103 s\u0103 sugereze caracterul ambiguu, de antegenez\u0103 \u015fi de sf\u00e2r\u015fit de lume. Scorpia \u00eenvins\u0103 se supune t\u00e2n\u0103rului crai. Biruitor, el, \u015fi de data aceasta, este m\u0103rinimos, las\u0103 pe cei doi mon\u015ftri \u00een via\u0163\u0103. Prin\u0163ul nu se las\u0103 ispitit de promisiunile m\u0103runte \u015fi trec\u0103toare ale Scorpiei. St\u0103p\u00e2nit de dorul dup\u0103 ,,via\u0163a f\u0103r\u0103 de moarte\u201d pleac\u0103 mai departe; 3. Pierz\u00e2nd socoteala zilelor \u015fi a nop\u0163ilor c\u0103l\u0103re\u0163ul \u015fi calul ajung la p\u0103durea animalelor s\u0103lbatice. Pe cer nu exist\u0103 nici soare, nici lun\u0103. E o noapte ve\u015fnic\u0103. Calul n\u0103zdr\u0103van cu c\u0103l\u0103re\u0163ul \u00een \u015fa survoleaz\u0103 cu supervitez\u0103 p\u0103durea, dar la aterizare este lovit un copac. Lovitura treze\u015fte din somn p\u0103durea \u015fi animalele ei, amenin\u0163\u00e2ndu-i. Imaginile de planet\u0103 moart\u0103 a \u0163inuturilor str\u0103b\u0103tute cu vitez\u0103 astronomic\u0103, bestiarul parc\u0103 sunt dintr-un scenariu SF. Dar, ca \u00een poveste, apare z\u00e2na salvatoare. Aceasta lini\u015fte\u015fte stihiile trezite, iar pe prin\u0163 \u015fi pe calul s\u0103u \u00eei trece dincolo \u00een palat [,,Palat de nunt\u0103 \u015fi cavou\u201d \u2013 Ion Barbu]. Moment de r\u0103scruce pentru prin\u0163. El a ie\u015fit din timp: ,,Petrec\u00e2nd vreme uitat\u0103\/ \u00centr-at\u00e2ta frumuse\u0163e,\/ Fa\u0163a lui \u00eennobilat\u0103\/ Sc\u00e2nteia de tinere\u0163e,\/ semn c\u0103 timpul m\u0103sura\/ \u00cei g\u0103sise\u2026 \u015fi\u2026 dovad\u0103\/ Ca-n r\u00e2vnita aventur\u0103\/ \u00cei fuse dat s\u0103 \u015fad\u0103.\u201d Ie\u015find din timp, craiul cade sub puterea uit\u0103rii. Z\u00e2na cea mic\u0103 \u00eei va fi so\u0163ie. Prin\u0163ul este liber s\u0103 colinde \u00een lung \u015fi \u00een lat \u0163inutul edenic av\u00e2nd o singur\u0103 interdic\u0163ie: s\u0103 nu calce \u00een Valea Pl\u00e2ngerii. Ispita exist\u0103. Plecat la v\u00e2n\u0103toare, act ini\u0163iatic, prin\u0163ul alearg\u0103 dup\u0103 un iepure, simbol complex str\u0103vechi, \u015fi astfel \u00eencalc\u0103 porunca. Din acel moment uitarea \u00eencepe s\u0103-\u015fi piard\u0103 din putere \u015fi ,,dorurile toate\/ Dor de mam\u0103, dor de tat\u0103\u201d pun st\u0103p\u00e2nire pe feciorul de \u00eemp\u0103rat. Acesta ,,se tope\u015fte pe picioare\u201d de dor. Cele trei z\u00e2ne \u015ftiind c\u0103 ,,Nemurirea-i\/ Visul viselor de\u015farte\u201d \u00eel elibereaz\u0103 fiind l\u0103sat s\u0103 le p\u0103r\u0103seasc\u0103.<br \/>\n\u00cencepe partea a doua a aventurii basmice. Prin\u0163ul \u015fi calul s\u0103u n\u0103zdr\u0103van str\u0103bat ,,ani lumin\u0103\/ \u00cen f\u0103ptura unei clipe\u201d \u00een sens invers drumul = timpul parcurs. \u00cen locul \u0163inuturilor lunare de alt\u0103dat\u0103 \u00eent\u00e2lnesc oameni, sate \u015fi ora\u015fe minunate, p\u0103m\u00e2nturi pline de roade. Gheonoaia, Scorpia cu lumile lor au devenit\u2026 basme. \u00cen timp ce str\u0103bate noile \u0163inuturi \u015fi st\u0103 de vorb\u0103 cu oamenii, Feciorul de \u00eemp\u0103rat \u00eemb\u0103tr\u00e2ne\u015fte devenind un mo\u015fneag g\u00e2rbovit \u015fi \u00eeng\u00e2ndurat. Cu ultimele puteri ajunge \u00een mijlocul unor ruine ce-i amintesc de cas\u0103, de p\u0103rin\u0163i, de un timp ce a trecut. Cobor\u00e2nd ,,g\u00e2rliciul vechi\u201d intr\u0103 \u00eentr-o ,,hrub\u0103 rece\u201d unde g\u0103se\u015fte ,,un tron [lad\u0103] b\u0103tut de vreme\u201d pe care \u00eel deschide. Ce g\u0103se\u015fte mo\u015fneagul \u00een\u0103untru? ,,\u00cen\u0103untru\u2026 mai\u2026 nimic\u2026\/ Doar o voce sl\u0103b\u0103noag\u0103,\/ N\u0103zuind c\u0103tre lumin\u0103,\/ R\u0103scoli vecia-ntreag\u0103\/ \u015ei o via\u0163\u0103 f\u0103r\u2019 de vin\u0103:\/\/ \u00abBine ai venit, copile,\/ \u00cempreun\u0103 cu norocu-\u0163i,\/ C\u0103 de nu, nu aveam zile,\/ Pr\u0103p\u0103dindu-m\u0103 \u00een locu-\u0163i.\u00bb\/ \u015ei-ating\u00e2ndu-l cu m\u00e2na,\/ Moartea, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 clipeasc\u0103,\/ \u00cel mut\u0103, pumn de \u0163\u0103r\u00e2n\u0103,\/ \u00cen \u0163\u0103r\u00e2na str\u0103mo\u015feasc\u0103.\u201d<br \/>\nNu cred c\u0103 gre\u015fesc c\u00e2nd afirm c\u0103, \u00een structurarea rescrierii basmului, Adrian Erbiceanu urmeaz\u0103 modelul lui Ion Barbu din Riga Crypto \u015fi lapona Enigel: ,,introducere\u201d \u00een poveste; povestea; ,,ie\u015firea\u201d din poveste. \u00cen cele patru octave ale ,,introducerii\u201d remarc\u0103m prezen\u0163a vocabulelor, sintagmelor \u015fi a imaginilor care alunec\u0103 de la concret spre abstract pentru a configura c\u00e2mpul semantic al timpului. Vectorul lor este ie\u015firea din timp. \u00cen schimb, \u00een cele patru octave ale ,,ie\u015firii\u201d din poveste mi\u015fcarea este invers\u0103, de la abstract spre concret, vectorul fiind spre reintrarea \u00een timpul profan.<br \/>\nCa reu\u015fite ale rescrierii basmului mai punct\u0103m: m\u00e2nuirea cu naturale\u0163e \u015fi profesionalism a tot ceea ce \u00eenseamn\u0103 versifica\u0163ie clasic\u0103; echilibrul strofic \u00eentre momentele epice; convie\u0163uirea pa\u015fnic\u0103 a limbajului popular (cu iriz\u0103ri regional-arhaice) cu cel neologic.<br \/>\nInspirat, poetul activeaz\u0103 t\u00e2lcurile moral-filosofice latente ale basmului, referitoare la destin, ideal, curaj, demnitate, omenie, \u00eemplinire \u015f.a. Dup\u0103 cum spuneam, toat\u0103 medita\u0163ia are ca centru gravita\u0163ional TIMPUL. \u00cen termeni mitico-poetici este vorba de ie\u015firea din increat \u015fi re\u00eentoarcerea \u00een increat.<br \/>\n\u00cen medita\u0163iile poetului \u015fi \u00een expresia lor lingvistico-poetic\u0103 adie ecouri eminesciene. Remarca nu este un repro\u015f, dimpotriv\u0103, o subliniere a influen\u0163ei catalitice a poetului na\u0163ional. Afinitatea acestor ecouri cu cititorul ne scute\u015fte de exemplific\u0103ri.<br \/>\nCitirea poemului prin grila psihanalizei analitice a lui C.G. Yung nu are rost s-o dezvolt aici \u015fi acum, deoarece frumuse\u0163ea \u015fi sensurile (arhetip, incon\u015ftient colectiv etc,) versurilor sunt u\u015for de perceput de cititor.<br \/>\nMarea \u00eenv\u0103\u0163\u0103tur\u0103 a pove\u015ftii despre Feciorul de \u00eemp\u0103rat pornit \u00een c\u0103utarea nemuririi, frumos \u00eenv\u0103luit\u0103 \u00een versuri, este urm\u0103toarea: omul este fiin\u0163\u0103 tragic\u0103. Povestea, a\u015fa cum o deap\u0103n\u0103 poetul Adrian Erbiceanu, ilustreaz\u0103 limpede \u015fi simplu una din dimensiunile condi\u0163iei tragice a fiin\u0163ei umane: dac\u0103-\u0163i dep\u0103\u015fe\u015fti limita e\u015fti pedepsit, dac\u0103 nu \u0163i-o dep\u0103\u015fe\u015fti nu e\u015fti om (cf Gabriel Liiceanu, Tragicul\u2026 , 1975, p. 41).<br \/>\nPovestea se repet\u0103 la nesf\u00e2r\u015fit, fiecare put\u00e2nd s\u0103-i fim protagonist: ,,Pun\u00e2nd cap\u0103t la poveste,\/ G\u00e2ndul, frem\u0103t\u00e2nd, ne duce\/ Spre \u00eendep\u0103rt\u0103ri celeste,\/ Unde alt\u0103 stea str\u0103luce\u2026\/ Iar pe raza-i de lumin\u0103,\/ Str\u0103juind noaptea ad\u00e2nc\u0103,\/ Prin\u0163ul m\u00e2ndru s\u0103 revin\u0103,\/ Trei zei\u0163e-a\u015fteapt\u0103 \u00eenc\u0103!\u201d \u015ei, mereu va exista cineva care s\u0103 asculte povestea: ,,Ceasul dat la jum\u0103tate\/ De t\u0103riile oculte,\/ Suflul nop\u0163ii \u00eel abate\/ Peste cei ce stau s-asculte.\u201d<br \/>\n\u00cen noua \u00eenf\u0103\u0163i\u015fare dat\u0103 de Adrian Erbiceanu, basmul poate fi citit ca alegorie a dorului poetului plecat \u00een lume dup\u0103 mam\u0103 \u015fi tat\u0103, dup\u0103 cas\u0103.<br \/>\nNu pot \u00eencheia f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 remarc \u0163inuta elegant\u0103 a volumului \u015fi excep\u0163ionalele ilustra\u0163ii realizate de artistul Adrian Popescu. Ilustra\u0163iile acestuia pe c\u00e2t de apropiate sunt de pictura popular\u0103 pe sticl\u0103, pe at\u00e2t de subtile sunt \u00een simbolistica personajelor \u015fi a culorilor. Mi-a r\u0103mas pe retin\u0103 ilustra\u0163ia de la pagina 31: pe ,,c\u0103ma\u015fa plato\u015f\u0103\u201d a Feciorului de \u00eemp\u0103rat se deseneaz\u0103 un M (moartea=timpul?!) \u015fi ultima ilustra\u0163ie (pagina 73) care \u00eenf\u0103\u0163i\u015feaz\u0103 ,,tronul\u201d \u00eempodobit cu rozete cu spi\u0163e, peste care se apleac\u0103 g\u00e2rbovit \u015fi \u00eeng\u00e2ndurat un mo\u015fneag. P\u0103cat de precaritatea leg\u0103toriei: nici nu am ajuns la sf\u00e2r\u015fitul lecturii \u015fi filele c\u0103r\u0163ii au \u00eenceput s\u0103 se desprind\u0103.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nPremiul revistei \u201eSpa\u0163ii culturale\u201d la Festivalul Na\u0163ional de Poezie \u201eAvandarda XXII\u201d, Bac\u0103u, 27-18 septembrie 2013<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>Adrian Nicolae POPESCU<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>adulter textil<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>mi-am invitat cravata<br \/>\ns\u0103 admir\u0103m \u00eempreun\u0103 realitatea de sub grind\u0103.<br \/>\nm-a refuzat elegant,<br \/>\nspun\u00e2ndu-mi c\u0103 pe sear\u0103<br \/>\nare bilet la premiera unei drame<br \/>\nsub crengile castanului \u00eenflorit<br \/>\nde la marginea drumului.<br \/>\ndisperat, am urm\u0103rit-o \u00een miez de noapte,<br \/>\np\u00e2ndindu-i p\u0103catul, desc\u0103tu\u015f\u00e2ndu-mi furia.<br \/>\ndansa ag\u0103\u0163at\u0103 de g\u00e2tul celuilalt,<br \/>\nunduindu-se cu mi\u015fc\u0103ri lascive<br \/>\n\u00een ritm de blues\u2026<br \/>\n\u015fi nici m\u0103car nu se asortau\u2026<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nnoi, \u00een oglind\u0103\u2026<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>l-am izgonit pe Ivan\u2026<br \/>\ndincolo de stele\u2026<br \/>\nzv\u00e2rlind coada sapei<br \/>\nde pe cr\u0103p\u0103turile palmelor,<br \/>\nne-am deghizat \u00een Giovanni,<br \/>\nvis\u00e2nd la temelii neridicate&#8230;<br \/>\nde\u015ftepta\u0163i de orologii precise,<br \/>\nap\u0103sa\u0163i de alte poveri<br \/>\nam \u00eembr\u0103cat sacoul vechi<br \/>\nal valetului John,<br \/>\nspre a urca deasupra tihnei<br \/>\nziduri mult prea \u00eenalte\u2026<br \/>\ntri\u015fti, f\u0103r\u0103 vlag\u0103,<br \/>\ncu spin\u0103ri de secer\u0103,<br \/>\nridic\u00e2nd piramide ro\u015fii,<br \/>\n\u00eentre soare \u015fi lun\u0103<br \/>\n\u00eendreptam \u00een ziua Domnului<br \/>\nh\u00e2rtiile sudorii,<br \/>\nmototolite \u00een buzunare hulpave<br \/>\nde urma\u015fii lui Don Juan\u2026<br \/>\nc\u0103ut\u00e2nd alinare<br \/>\nt\u00e2rziu, \u00een noapte,<br \/>\nne lini\u015fteam sufletul<br \/>\ncu vorbe curate\u2026 de-acas\u0103\u2026<br \/>\nfredon\u00e2ndu-ne jalea,<br \/>\n\u00een\u0103bu\u015findu-ne dorul<br \/>\nam\u0103gindu-ne c\u0103 mai e pu\u0163in\u2026<br \/>\ntot mai pu\u0163in<br \/>\np\u00e2n\u0103 vom fi iar\u0103\u015fi\u2026 Ion.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nalerg\u00e2nd dup\u0103 cuvinte<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>am deschis ochii\u2026<br \/>\nmari, negri<br \/>\nla o margine de lume,<br \/>\nnecunosc\u00e2ndu-mi cuvintele\u2026<br \/>\nam \u00eenceput s\u0103 alerg<br \/>\n\u015fi s\u0103 le caut<br \/>\nf\u0103r\u0103 a \u015fti c\u0103 ele m\u0103 a\u015fteptau\u2026<br \/>\nde ceva vreme\u2026<br \/>\nle-am aflat \u00eenmiresmate<br \/>\nprintre petalele b\u0103tr\u00e2nului zarz\u0103r\u2026<br \/>\nazv\u00e2rlind \u00een suli\u0163e roua zorilor,<br \/>\nr\u0103v\u0103\u015find potecile ascunse<br \/>\nale codrilor de brazi\u2026<br \/>\nh\u0103l\u0103duind prin poieni \u015fi mun\u0163i,<br \/>\nascult\u00e2nd \u00eenc\u0103 mugind<br \/>\nturmele de zimbri\u2026<br \/>\nlu\u00e2ndu-le urma,<br \/>\nlunec\u00e2nd f\u0103r\u0103 \u015foapt\u0103,<br \/>\nle-am g\u0103sit c\u0103tre sear\u0103<br \/>\nsub piciorul pun\u0163ii \u015ftirbite<br \/>\nl\u00e2ng\u0103 celelalte vorbe,<br \/>\nfug\u0103rite printre coline,<br \/>\nsupte sub lun\u0103 plin\u0103<br \/>\n\u015fi purtate apoi de acvile<br \/>\n\u00eenspre glorie\u2026<br \/>\neterna glorie\u2026<br \/>\nde\u015fir\u00e2ndu-mi destinul,<br \/>\nle-am ad\u0103postit \u00een palme<br \/>\nsorbindu-le, potolindu-mi setea<br \/>\nce nu fusese p\u00e2n\u0103 atunci<br \/>\n\u2026 rostit\u0103.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nexerci\u0163iu algic<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>te-am p\u0103strat con\u015ftient \u00een talp\u0103<br \/>\ncontopindu-m\u0103 cu durerea,<br \/>\nnecunosc\u00e2ndu-\u0163i \u00eenc\u0103 destinul.<\/p>\n<p>am \u00eencercat s\u0103 te descop\u0103r<br \/>\nf\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103-\u0163i tulbur lini\u015ftea,<br \/>\nrefugiindu-m\u0103 doar \u00een hazard:<br \/>\ninsul\u0103 disp\u0103rut\u0103\u2026<br \/>\ncorabie scufundat\u0103 de furtun\u0103\u2026<br \/>\ncenu\u015f\u0103 risipit\u0103 \u00een valuri\u2026<br \/>\nidil\u0103 interzis\u0103 cu final asumat\u2026<\/p>\n<p>te-ai ad\u0103postit \u00een mine<br \/>\nspre a medita<br \/>\ntu, fir de nisip<br \/>\nal iubirii de-o var\u0103\u2026<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nscurtmetraj<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>stropi de ploaie striveau<br \/>\ntabla ruginit\u0103 a pervazului.<br \/>\nte priveam, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 te b\u00e2ntui<br \/>\nafundat \u00een canapeaua moale,<br \/>\nfiltr\u00e2nd lini\u015ftea de dinaintea cafelei.<br \/>\ndincolo de \u015fosea, la geamul t\u0103u<br \/>\n\u00ee\u0163i jucai f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 \u015ftii rolul<br \/>\n\u00een filmul meu mut,<br \/>\ncu scene lipsite de substan\u0163\u0103<br \/>\nce nu puteau fi \u00eendep\u0103rtate<br \/>\nnici m\u0103car la montaj.<br \/>\ndezveleai r\u00e2nd pe r\u00e2nd<br \/>\nz\u00e2mbete, str\u0103luciri zugr\u0103vite \u00een albastru,<br \/>\nad\u0103postite de evantaie efilate,<br \/>\nce tres\u0103reau doar atunci<br \/>\nc\u00e2nd d\u0103deai pagina mai departe.<br \/>\nploaia se \u00eente\u0163ea<br \/>\nrisipindu-\u0163i mirajul,<br \/>\niar tu disp\u0103reai, voalat,<br \/>\nasemeni unei holograme<br \/>\np\u0103r\u0103site treptat<br \/>\nde curentul s\u0103u alternativ.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nincertitudini fecunde<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>respins\u0103 de vise,<br \/>\nm-ai provocat s\u0103-\u0163i dezv\u0103lui<br \/>\neternul feminin \u201e c\u00e2t de mult\u2026\u201d.<br \/>\ncu palmele mari \u015fi ude<br \/>\n\u0163i-am ferecat atunci ochii,<br \/>\n\u015fi, adulmec\u00e2ndu-\u0163i suflarea<br \/>\nte-am aflat rezon\u00e2nd dincolo de atingeri.<br \/>\ndeasupra smereniei, renega\u0163i de \u015fabloane<br \/>\ngalopam despuia\u0163i printre s\u0103ruturi e\u015fuate,<br \/>\nf\u0103r\u0103 a ne afla printre ele.<br \/>\name\u0163ite, cu unduiri incandescente,<br \/>\nperseidele se amestecau frenetic<br \/>\n\u00eentr-un dans prolific,<br \/>\nmu\u015fc\u00e2nd haotic din eterul cernit.<br \/>\nlovite de sete,<br \/>\nizbeau limpezimile terestre<br \/>\nridic\u00e2nd nori angelici, acoperindu-ne urma.<br \/>\nfug\u0103ri\u0163i din curcubeu,<br \/>\nalbatro\u015fii pigmenta\u0163i<br \/>\nse t\u0103v\u0103leau prin colbul de stele,<br \/>\ndeghiz\u00e2ndu-se subtil \u00een voiajori inelari.<br \/>\nsim\u0163indu-\u0163i parfumul,<br \/>\nplaneta trandafirilor albi<br \/>\ncutez\u0103 s\u0103-\u015fi ascut\u0103 spinii,<br \/>\npentru a-i scrijeli un autograf printre petale.<br \/>\nrespir\u00e2nd agonic,<br \/>\nse oglindi \u00een ochii t\u0103i mari<br \/>\n\u015fi, speriat\u0103  de ad\u00e2ncimea lor se \u00eembujor\u0103,<br \/>\nfur\u00e2nd un strop<br \/>\ndin seva degetelor tale.<br \/>\nne-am reg\u0103sit unul pe cel\u0103lalt<br \/>\ndincolo de pleoapele deschise,<br \/>\nalerg\u00e2nd spre orizonturi latente,<br \/>\ndincolo de vlag\u0103\u2026<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nValeriu SOFRONIE<\/strong><br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/10\/sofronie.jpg\" data-rel=\"lightbox-image-4\" data-rl_title=\"\" data-rl_caption=\"\" title=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/10\/sofronie.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"193\" height=\"299\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-11306 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 193px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 193\/299;\" \/><noscript><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/10\/sofronie.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"193\" height=\"299\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-11306\" \/><\/noscript><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>WITTGENSTEIN vs. TAI CHI<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Cultura oriental\u0103 este, \u00eentre altele, o cultur\u0103 a armoniz\u0103rii omului cu natura, un efort constant de punere de acord a ritmurilor psiho-fizice individuale cu cele cosmice. Dovad\u0103 a acestei reu\u015fite este \u015fi persisten\u0163a unor forme culturale, expresii ale acestor tentative, p\u00e2n\u0103 ast\u0103zi. Dincolo de a fi doar obiect al subiectivit\u0103\u0163ii noastre simili-solipsiste, physis-ul este mai ales un partener existen\u0163ial. \u00cen cultura noastr\u0103 occidental\u0103, natura a fost de cele mai multe ori scop al unor \u00eencerc\u0103ri de supunere, de aducere sub control, de exercitare a dorin\u021bei de st\u0103p\u00e2nire. \u00cendemnul baconian la ,,ascultarea\u201d naturii, pentru ca mai apoi s\u0103 urmeze ,,\u00eenvingerea\u201d ei, este mai mult dec\u00e2t l\u0103muritor pentru epistema occidental\u0103. Tr\u0103im \u00eentr-o lume \u00een care idealul nu este contemplarea, ci interven\u0163ia. Chiar modul de a face \u015ftiin\u0163\u0103 este ilustrativ \u00een acest sens. Indiferent c\u00e2t de imaginativ\u0103 este maniera de construire a ipotezelor, finalitatea unui construct \u015ftiin\u0163ific trebuie, p\u00e2n\u0103 la urm\u0103, testat\u0103 \u00een practic\u0103 (experiment). Se vorbe\u015fte din ce \u00een ce mai mult \u0219i mai des de imperialismul culturii noastre. Modul aretic de aducere sub ascultare a stihiilor naturii \u00eei urmeaz\u0103 \u00eendeaproape acela\u015fi mod de valorificare a rela\u0163iei cu cel\u0103lalt. Omul devine el \u00eensu\u015fi scop al ac\u0163iunii de st\u0103p\u00e2nire. Din persoan\u0103, homo sapiens se transform\u0103 \u00een lucru, analizat, disecat p\u00e2n\u0103 la ultimii s\u0103i atomi. Apoi reansamblat, ca orice alt\u0103 ma\u015fin\u0103rie.<br \/>\nC\u00e2t de diferit este exponentul culturii de tip oriental! O simpl\u0103 vizit\u0103 \u00eentr-un parc din China  ne l\u0103mure\u015fte de adev\u0103rul acestei teze. Al\u0103turi de celelalte arte, arta gimnasticii (mar\u0163ial\u0103) scoate \u00een eviden\u0163\u0103 acela\u015fi mod de \u00een\u0163elegere a elementelor. Nimic nu frapeaz\u0103 mai mult aici dec\u00e2t dorin\u0163a de a \u00eentre\u0163ine permanent starea de mi\u015fcare, de comuniune dinamic\u0103 \u00eentre om \u015fi natur\u0103. Practicantul Tai chi vede \u00een obstacolele ap\u0103rute \u00een calea \u00eentre\u0163inerii st\u0103rii de mi\u015fcare tot at\u00e2tea modalit\u0103\u0163i de rupere a leg\u0103turilor dintre ritmurile interne \u015fi cele externe. Prin tehnici speciale, lupt\u0103torul \u00ee\u015fi aliniaz\u0103 \u015fi \u00ee\u015fi conecteaz\u0103 \u00eentreaga sa structur\u0103 cu p\u0103m\u00e2ntul, l\u0103s\u00e2nd energia acestuia s\u0103 treac\u0103 prin canalele sale ca printr-o conduct\u0103. Energia (chi-ul) urc\u0103 de-a lungul coloanei vertebrale \u0219i coboar\u0103 apoi prin fa\u021ba corpului, unde este preluat\u0103 \u0219i desc\u0103rcat\u0103 de m\u00e2ini. Practicantul trebuie s\u0103 alterneze \u00eentre plin \u0219i gol, avansare \u0219i retragere, mi\u0219c\u0103ri de \u00eempingere \u0219i mi\u0219c\u0103ri de retragere, respira\u021bia ocup\u00e2nd \u00een economia acestui r\u00e2u \u00een ve\u015fnic\u0103 curgere o func\u0163ie esen\u0163ial\u0103. Fiecare pozi\u0163ie face leg\u0103tura cu urm\u0103toarea, f\u0103r\u0103 pauz\u0103, \u00een timp ce trupul se va afla \u00een mi\u015fcare \u00een mod constant. Nu exist\u0103 blocaje. Nu exist\u0103 \u00eentreruperi. Doar necesitatea zilei \u00eel face pe maestru s\u0103 \u00eentrerup\u0103 nunta cosmic\u0103 \u015fi s\u0103 revin\u0103 \u00een prezentul util. Dar \u015fi a\u015fa, p\u0103str\u00e2nd zanshin-ul. Filosofia oriental\u0103 este \u015fi ea un ingredient al acestui modus existen\u0163ial. Ea nu reprezint\u0103 o disciplin\u0103 doar a min\u0163ii, izolat\u0103 de via\u0163a de fiecare zi. Felul holist de a \u00een\u0163elege existen\u021ba a \u00eempiedicat elaborarea unei discipline filosofice autonome. Sincretismul oriental manifest\u0103 oroare de specializare. Filosofia aici este la fel de important\u0103 ca \u015fi respira\u0163ia, mi\u015fcarea m\u00e2inilor \u015fi a picioarelor, concentrarea pe punctul din partea de jos a abdomenului (Tantien-ul inferior). Ea nu reprezint\u0103, cum spunea Kant, \u201eo construire a imaginii lumii din no\u0163iuni\u201d. Filosofia nu e cunoa\u015ftere de dragul cunoa\u015fterii, activitate pur intelectual\u0103. Filosofia este o lebensform \u00een act, nu doar \u00een poten\u021b\u0103.<br \/>\n\u00cen occident \u00eens\u0103, practica specializ\u0103rii este la ordinea zilei. Gimnastica e doar gimnastic\u0103. Arta e doar art\u0103. Filosofia, filosofie. Nimic mai mult. Toate \u00eenceputurile stau pentru occidental sub semnul timpului havuz. Clipa care vine, prin faptul c\u0103 e ultima, \u00eei este superioar\u0103 celei de dinainte. Ziua de m\u00e2ine \u00eei va fi \u00eenv\u0103\u0163\u0103tor celei de azi. Newton \u00eei este superior lui Galilei, Einstein lui Newton. Timpul nu are circularitate. Nu \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103tor, conceptul sf\u00e2r\u015fe\u015fte \u00een formalism logic. G\u00e2ndirea aduce la acela\u015fi numitor omul \u015fi Marele Necuprins numai prin intermediul conceptului matematic. \u00cen rest, ruptura continua s\u0103 reziste.<br \/>\nExist\u0103 \u00eens\u0103 \u015fi moduri occidentale de privire asupra lumii care sunt mai degrab\u0103 excep\u0163ii dec\u00e2t regula. Nu ne referim aici dec\u00e2t la Wittgenstein. Felul s\u0103u de a \u00een\u0163elege filosofia ne aminte\u015fte mai degrab\u0103 de maestrul Taiji dec\u00e2t de Kant. Problemele, pentru g\u00e2nditorul vienez, apar \u00een filosofie nu pentru c\u0103 filosoful e un om care \u015fi-a pierdut judecata sau unul care nu vede ceea ce vede toat\u0103 lumea. Pe de alt\u0103 parte, dezacordul s\u0103u cu ceilal\u0163i, cu reprezentan\u0163ii g\u00e2ndirii comune, nu se bazeaz\u0103 pe o cunoa\u015ftere mai subtil\u0103 a faptelor. Pentru autorul Investiga\u0163iilor filosofice, sursa \u201e\u00eencurc\u0103turilor\u201d trebuie c\u0103utat\u0103 \u00een felul \u00een care ne folosim de anatomia limbajului, adic\u0103 de gramatica sa. \u201eLimbajul nostru obi\u015fnuit, care, dintre toate sistemele posibile de nota\u0163ie, este cel care str\u0103bate \u00eentreaga noastr\u0103 via\u0163\u0103, \u0163ine mintea noastr\u0103 \u00een mod rigid \u00eentr-o pozi\u0163ie (s.n.)\u2026 iar \u00een aceast\u0103 pozi\u0163ie ea se simte uneori amor\u0163it\u0103, dorind \u015fi alte pozi\u0163ii\u201d. Cu alte cuvinte, \u00eencremenirea \u00een local, neputin\u0163a de a trece de la un joc de limbaj la altul, de la un context la altul, for\u0163area generaliz\u0103rii acolo unde nu \u00eencape loc dec\u00e2t pentru topici&#8230;toate acestea conduc la felul defectuos occidental de a face filosofie. Atragerea aten\u0163iei asupra mecanismelor care redescoper\u0103 elasticitatea limbajului, a\u015fa cum maestrul oriental redescoperea elasticitatea corpului \u015fi a min\u0163ii, ar putea reprezenta o \u015fans\u0103 pentru reintroducerea filosofiei \u00een corpul nostru existen\u0163ial, altfel dec\u00e2t pe calea artificial\u0103 a bibliotecilor.<br \/>\nRaportat la trendul actual, Wittgenstein reprezint\u0103 mai degrab\u0103 un om al viitorului dec\u00e2t al trecutului. O lectur\u0103 a crea\u0163iei sale, cu perspectiv\u0103 global\u0103, ar putea reprezenta o \u00eencercare eficient\u0103 de a uni filosofia cu via\u0163\u0103 \u015fi Orientul cu Occidentul.<\/p>\n<p><strong><br \/>\nIulia STOLERIU<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>GHEORGHE ANDREI NEAGU &#8211; LACRIMA IUBIRII <\/strong><br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/14-2-e1664234363577.jpg\" data-rel=\"lightbox-image-5\" data-rl_title=\"\" data-rl_caption=\"\" title=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" data-src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/14-2-181x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"181\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-19276 lazyload\" src=\"data:image\/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAAAAACH5BAEKAAEALAAAAAABAAEAAAICTAEAOw==\" style=\"--smush-placeholder-width: 181px; --smush-placeholder-aspect-ratio: 181\/300;\" \/><noscript><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/09\/14-2-181x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"181\" height=\"300\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-19276\" \/><\/noscript><\/a>\t<\/p>\n<p>\tDespre iubire s-au spus at\u00e2t de multe, totu\u0219i nicic\u00e2nd nu va fi spus totul&#8230;<br \/>\n\tCu volumul de poeme \u201eLacrima iubirii\u201d, cunoscutul prozator Gheorghe Andrei Neagu \u015fi-ad\u0103ugat propriile sentimente \u0219i g\u00e2nduri subiectului inepuizabil al iubirii. \u00cemi place s\u0103 cred c\u0103 \u201eLacrima iubirii\u201d se scurge limpede din \u201eTemplul iubirii\u201d (proz\u0103), c\u0103 acesta i-ar fi un izvor tainic. Aici, din iarba ce cre\u0219te \u00een \u201eTemplul iubirii\u201d, autorul culege \u0219i ofer\u0103 buchete de flori ale frumuse\u021bii, delicate\u021bii \u0219i tandre\u021bii: \u201eSe spune de obicei, c\u0103 iarba e plin\u0103 de flori&#8230; Unii nu v\u0103d acest lucru. Spun  c\u0103-i iarba \u00eenflorit\u0103 \u0219i-at\u00e2t, chiar dac\u0103 arareori ne plec\u0103m \u00een fa\u021ba florilor. Suntem dispu\u0219i s\u0103 d\u0103m crezare celor care v\u0103d c\u0103 iarba-i \u00eenflorit\u0103. Dar pentru ace\u0219tia, p\u0103m\u00e2ntul nu are forma \u0219i con\u021binutul bine conturat. Numai celor ale\u0219i s\u0103 vad\u0103 iarba \u00eenflorind li se supune natura cu adev\u0103rat. Numai lor li se \u00eenf\u0103\u021bi\u0219eaz\u0103 floarea ierbii, pentru c\u0103 ei pot vedea lucruri ce-ar r\u0103m\u00e2ne pururi nev\u0103zute. Iar atunci c\u00e2nd ne iau de m\u00e2n\u0103 s\u0103 ne arate minunile sufletului lor, trebuie s\u0103-i umplem cu recuno\u0219tin\u021ba noastr\u0103. Prin ei am v\u0103zut partea nev\u0103zut\u0103 a lucrurilor. Prin ei devenim p\u0103r\u021bi adev\u0103rate ale unor lucruri nev\u0103zute. Prin ei prindem contur. Prin ei sim\u021bim frumuse\u021bea apartenen\u021bei noastre.Prin ei vom gusta bucurii neb\u0103nuite, devenind mai frumo\u0219i&#8230; Iubi\u021bi-i pe ace\u0219ti oameni, rari ca iarba \u00eenflorit\u0103&#8230;\u201d (\u201eTemplul iubirii\u201d).<br \/>\n\tOdat\u0103 ie\u0219it din templu, ca in\u021biat, iat\u0103 c\u0103 autorul propag\u0103 acum cuvinte l\u0103crim\u00e2nde \u00eentru g\u0103sirea iubirii \u0219i prin aceasta reg\u0103sirea sinelui \u00eemplinit:<br \/>\n\u201eCuprinde-m\u0103 \u00een bra\u021be \/ \u0218i ia-m\u0103 \u00een cuv\u00e2nt \/ R\u0103pe\u0219te-m\u0103 durerii \/ Iube\u0219te-m\u0103 cum sunt\u201d &#8211; (\u201eA\u0219a cum sunt\u201d)<br \/>\n\tSursa rostirii potrivite pentru \u00eentreprinderea sa este dezv\u0103luit\u0103 a fi \u201eSub lacrima fierbinte z\u0103pada din priviri, Acoper\u0103 cuvinte&#8230;\u201d &#8211; (\u201eCerul\u201d)<br \/>\n\tIubirea traverseaz\u0103 v\u00e2rstele \u00een inelele de amintiri \u00eencrustate \u00een carne, purt\u0103toare ale temerii de \u201ecoala alb\u0103\u201d poten\u021bializ\u00e2nd \u00eenfrunzirea condeiului \u00een cuvinte ce p\u00e2rguiesc \u201epoeme lungi pictate cu aur \u0219i cerneal\u0103\u201d deschiz\u0103toare a p\u0103durilor de cuvinte \u00een care fiecare copac semnific\u0103 masculinitatea, b\u0103rb\u0103tescul:<br \/>\n\u201eTrupul copacului se umple de lumin\u0103 \/ \u0218i se aprinde \u00een ochii femeii \/ \u00cen timp ce tr\u0103ie\u0219te cuminte \/ \u00centreaga prefacere a timpului lor \/ \u00centr-o cas\u0103 fecund\u0103\u201d &#8211; (\u201eDilema\u201d)<br \/>\n\tCuvintele ajung s\u0103 se \u00eencing\u0103 \u00een jarul iubirii, s\u0103 pietrifice \u201eamestec de iubire \u0219i ran\u0103, de delicate\u021be \u0219i cutremur interior\u201d: \u201eCu degetele grele de lacrimi \u0219i ploi \/ De trupurile noastre, goi de strigoi&#8230;\/ Copil am fost \u0219i mai sunt \u00eenc\u0103 \/ Iubirea noastr\u0103 r\u0103m\u00e2ne-va st\u00e2nc\u0103\u201d &#8211; (\u201eCopil\u201d)<br \/>\n\tPoetul \u0219tie c\u0103 visurile cele mai importante sunt cele ini\u021biate \u0219i p\u0103strate \u00een inim\u0103 \u0219i chiar dac\u0103 ele nu mai pot fi actualizate niciodat\u0103, r\u0103m\u00e2n experien\u021be c\u0103l\u0103uzitoare unice ale existen\u021bei. \u00cen consecin\u021b\u0103, tr\u0103iri, iubiri, amintiri, ca un v\u00e2rtej de frunze, se pot transfigura, sub v\u00e2ntul lucidit\u0103\u021bii iscat la maturitate,  \u00eentr-o mare de cuvinte cu valuri de \u00een\u021belepciune: \u201eCu cine-mi \u00eenflore\u0219te timpul \/ C\u00e2nd universul moare trist \u00een mine? \/ Cu cine s\u0103-mi usuc de ploi \/ Durerea g\u00e2ndului \u00een doi?\u201d &#8211; (\u201eMarea de cuvinte\u201d)<br \/>\n\tIar dac\u0103 prezentul este golful de regrete al clipelor de iubire trecute, mai este, \u00een acela\u0219i timp, \u0219i respira\u021bia acestora prin porii de-amintiri: \u201e\u021ai-a respirat vreodat\u0103 cerul-n bra\u021be? \/ Pe t\u00e2mple luna te-a mai s\u0103rutat? \/ C\u0103lc\u0103m pe sentimente \/ \u0218i au un gust ciudat&#8230;\u201d &#8211; (\u201eRespira\u021bie\u201d)<br \/>\n\tDin \u201eLacrima iubirii\u201d, aceast\u0103 alt\u0103 oglind\u0103 a scriitorului Gheorghe Andrei Neagu, avem prilejul s\u0103 alc\u0103tuim, din cioburi ale iubirilor noastre, propriile oglinzi, pentru c\u0103 despre iubire s-au spus at\u00e2t de multe, totu\u0219i nicic\u00e2nd nu va fi spus totul&#8230;  <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Vasilica ILIE Elegie optimist\u0103 a\u015f putea \u00eencepe toate zilele cu un optimism debordant dar m\u0103 opre\u015fte con\u015ftiin\u0163a care strig\u0103 disperat\u0103<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":18,"featured_media":10070,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"colormag_page_container_layout":"default_layout","colormag_page_sidebar_layout":"default_layout","_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_uf_show_specific_survey":0,"_uf_disable_surveys":false,"ngg_post_thumbnail":0,"video_url":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[7,328],"tags":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19273"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/18"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=19273"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19273\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":19277,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/19273\/revisions\/19277"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/10070"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=19273"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=19273"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ziarulderimnic.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=19273"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}